Edits

My dad told me that if I have time today, I needed to write a post on my blog. I have time, so I am writing. I have decided to tell you about all the errors on my other posts. Here they are: I Do Solemnly Swear..... I did not use the right that worked in the sentence. I spelled "allowed" "aloud". Please Get Cold! I spelled "without" "with out". I guess I can spell it both ways, but I like "without". Happy Birthday!!! On purpose, I wrote "cuz" instead of "because". Don't ask me why. Happy New Year....Though a Little Late The sentence says, "I have not seen her since end of June '07". I meant to say, I have not seen her since the end of June '07. Also, "We did history on the way up, and some for tomorrow on the way back". What I meant was, "We did History on the way up, and some for tomorrow on the way back". True Story of Rudolph I didn't make this error, the person who wrote the story did, but I will tell anyway. This is what it says, "Wards went on to print, Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer and distribute it to children visiting Santa in their stores." It should say, "Wards went on to print Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer and distribute it to children visiting Santa in their stores." (no comma) Here's another... "By 1946 Wards had printed and distributed more than six million copies of Rudolph." It should go like this: "By 1946, Wards had printed and distributed more than six million copies of Rudolph." (there's a comma) Nathan...tsk tsk tsk Here's what it says: "The first time he put posts about all of his trophies, and then didn't use his blog for AGES!!" It should say:"The first time, he put posts about all of his trophies, and then didn't use his blog for AGES!!" My Thanksgiving It says, "Anyway, when we got there, Nathan and I went down stairs, and played a game of chess." It should say, "Anyway, when we got there, Nathan and I went downstairs, and played a game of chess." (no space between "down" and "stairs". It could be both ways, though.) Another one: "She said yes, so we got on our swimsuits, and after being in the a little bit, Nathan got this CRAZY idea that he wanted to go jump in the pool that hadn't been heated!" I meant to say, "She said "yes", so we got on our swimsuits, and after being in the hot tub a little bit, Nathan got this CRAZY idea that he wanted to go jump in the pool that hadn't been heated!" And another: "After he jumped in once, I said I mean' he had to do it a total of three times." This is what I meant to say: "After he jumped in once, I said I meant he had to do it a total of three times." And Another: "Anyway, after we came in from the hot tub, everyone though it was time for dessert, so we had it." Here's what I meant to say: "Anyway, after we came in from the hot tub, everyone thought it was time for dessert, so we had it."

I will finish the rest of the posts later.